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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2012-03-04 08:18 PM



Bashed, broken, bruised,
beaten bloody.
Torn apart
tantalizingly
slow.
Bones snapped
and skin scratched
leaving me
a mangled
mess.

And I can't heal
correctly.
I let my body
rebuild itself
but ignore all
the overpowering
emotions.
Infection
inflaming
my mind.

Yes--
time does heal.
But who the hell
forgot to mention
it heals
how it's left?

Never
set back
to how I was,
I heal
incorrectly.

Now
I'm perminately
bashed, broken, bruised
beaten bloody
even though
I appear

perfect.

© Copyright 2012 Sarah Grace - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2012-03-08 02:14 AM


very good!

Kate

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