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When I Loved You

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G. A. Webb
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Stanton, California, USA


0 posted 01-09-2012 05:10 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

I reflect upon
The years Iíve wasted
The souls Iíve touched
And lips Iíve tasted
My simple heart
With life anew
Was cast aside
When I loved you

I think of all
The roads Iíve crossed
The friends Iíve made
The time Iíve lost
The foolish songs
I sung for two
Were torn asunder
When I loved you

Now looking back
Itís clear to see
There is no one
Thatís meant for me
Protest you not
These thoughts I spew
For you cared naught
When I loved you

Drifting down
This path I follow
No more have I
A heart to swallow
Although Iíve learned
A thing or two
My soul was scarred
When I loved you


G. A. Webb
01/09/12


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (01-09-2012 08:18 PM).]

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ponderthepoetorrsx
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1 posted 01-09-2012 10:22 PM       View Profile for ponderthepoetorrsx   Email ponderthepoetorrsx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ponderthepoetorrsx

yet another wonderfully sad poem i can relate to i loved it
G. A. Webb
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2 posted 01-10-2012 12:51 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

This piece isn't about any one person, rather all the women who have come into my life, taken what they needed and then left..

Thank you, I'm glad you liked this piece and sorry to hear that you can relate.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

maddorani
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3 posted 01-11-2012 06:48 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i love it i can relate to ti too
G. A. Webb
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4 posted 01-15-2012 03:40 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Thank you maddorani.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Marilyn
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5 posted 07-13-2012 01:29 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I have known more then my share of these folks...though they would be male.
voice2bheard
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6 posted 07-17-2012 06:10 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I dont have any exact words to describe this poem, but I will say that it was a great write and I really enjoyed it and can relate! excellant work!

Kate

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


7 posted 08-09-2012 04:14 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

very simply and beautifully written, so deeply understood
byski
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8 posted 09-18-2012 04:25 AM       View Profile for byski   Email byski   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit byski's Home Page   View IP for byski

The flow was great, I don't think I could stop reading it once started if I tried. Not that I would want to, of course.
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9 posted 03-08-2014 01:11 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Dang this is great ! The feeling in here was described well
springtao
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10 posted 03-18-2014 04:39 PM       View Profile for springtao   Email springtao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for springtao

well done poet !
 
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