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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-12-11 05:39 PM



In reality there is no such thing
As happily ever after
In reality there is no such thing
As dead people coming back to life
In reality there is no such thing
As prince charming.
In reality there is no such thing
As peace.-
Instead of happily ever after
Our happiness and smiles
Last for a while.
In movies there are such
Things as the loved ones
Coming back to life.
In reality couples break up
And get divorced.
In this world there
Are only wars
Dictators
And corruption.-
We wish we had
Happily ever after
We wish we had
A power for the loved
Ones coming back
We wish there was peace.-
But apparently “the reality”
Is different.
Than these magical
Fairy tales.-
The truth hurts
More than the lies
And there is nothing
We can do about it!

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-12 08:51 PM


I really like this one. The concept was interesting and the writing was carried out well. A well rounded poem, I enjoyed it very much.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-12-12 09:03 PM


thanks
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