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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-10-28 02:04 PM


i know its been a while but i have been in the teen poetry i will be going back and forth so plz enjoy


I have been neglected
I have been rejected
Even though I try to
Be accepted
But no one accepts me
No one cares.-
I try to go on with my life.
A depressing isolated life.
With tears boiling inside
My eyes.-
I see people being happy
Without a care in the
World.
I wonder……
Can I be happy like that too?
Can I have a peaceful life too?
Can I also live without a care in the world?-
Because I’m lonely
Because no one wants me
It’s like I’m a background
Character
That doesn’t seem to exist.
It hurts not to be accepted
It hurts to be rejected
It hurts to be neglected
I tried
And tried
But there was no result
What can I do?
What should I do?
Did I do something wrong?
Did I do…..something wrong!?-
I thought I would have a few
People by my side
But I don’t
I thought I would have
A little bit of hope
And happiness
But I don’t .-
Instead I’m deserted
Instead I’m just ignored
What’s the point of trying?
What’s the point of being there?
When all I am is a mockery!
When all I am is a toy!
Playing with my emotions
Playing with my feelings.-
At least I learned the truth
That I will always be neglected
I will always get rejected
And I will never get accepted.



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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-10-31 07:44 PM


Horrible feelings written so beautifully! It breaks my heart and stirs my mind, so full of pain and anger! Every poem gets better and better! Keep posting, please.
maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-10-31 07:54 PM


don worry i will hehe and thanks i love your poems to they have a rhythm and a sad feeling to it like bittersweet kind of feeling
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