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Reflection on today
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Reflection on today |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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These last few months have engulfed me in a mental cage, At times, I feel like even this can’t be cured by a sage, My emotions toy with me as my soul becomes enraged, Sometimes the belief within self sounds like I am deranged, My passion for life has smolder to a just a spark- Glowing every so dimly as if I don’t even have a heart, No contemplation of death seeks me today, Only the severity of being lost is what greets me now, Each day becomes a constant struggle, As if I am bound by a chain that is forevermore tightening, Collapsing the creativity until it breathes it last breath, I am afraid to gulp free will, fearing it as a feeble attempt to succeed, Mass produced now are quick fix ideas, neglecting the view of the forest, A tree that is old and is becoming infected from within, The cure lies not outside of itself, Seconds turn to hours, as time continues at a rhythmic pace, I sit here, mentally doomed to look at it, unable to conceive anything else, This place I am at now, is solitude of survival, Any contact outside of this is seen as an infinitely wise move, Nay, I reach not outward for the remedy, but seek to immerse myself in this silence, One day I will reflect back and think of this moment and see how far I have been carried away from it. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Wow, very stunning. Absolutly beautiful! I was not expecting the ending at all, but that makes it all the more wonderful. |
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Angels Fall Junior Member
since 2011-10-31
Posts 11United States |
I love the very descreptive words and meanings behind them. Tis a very well done poem. I can only take so much before I love you starts to sound like a lie. |
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