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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-10-05 11:35 PM



Are you a memory?
Do you even exist?-
When I try to touch your face
I can’t feel anything.
When I reach toward your hand
I can’t reach it
As if you’re somewhere
Far away-
I try to catch up to you by
Hastening and pacing
Breathlessly, panicking,
Anxiously just to see
If you are a memory
Or not
Just to see if you
Exist or not-
But the more I catch up
To you
The further you go
The more I come closer
The more distant you become-
Please stop!
I want to see you
Please stop!
I don’t want you to become
A memory
Please stop!
I want you to exist-
Please stop!
Please stop!
Please stop!
Can’t you see?
How I’m lagging behind?
Can’t you see?
How I’m desperate?
Can’t you see?
How despondent I am?
Can’t you see?
How my feet are being tainted?
Can’t you see?
How my dress is disintegrating?
Just like me!
Can’t you turn back?
And look for once
Please stop!?-
I want you to
Look me in the eye
Touch my face
Hold my hand
To confirm
If you exist
Or if you
Are just a memory
That I am trying
To find
Within my heart

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-04 04:21 PM


The way you have written these words makes it move like a frantic mind, and it give the poem that much more value and detail. Wonderful job, I always love your poems.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-12-04 04:55 PM


thank you
ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
3 posted 2011-12-07 07:41 PM


loved the dress disintegrating part and the poem in itself

yolilitzli

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
4 posted 2011-12-07 08:19 PM


thank you
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
5 posted 2012-07-17 06:33 PM


So I actually enjoyed this, in all my years of writing, I to can relate to this poem having feelings towards someone like this, however after all my years of wanting to be with him, I finally am! Things will look up just stay positive, like a friend has always told me! Execellant write though!

Kate

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
6 posted 2012-07-17 09:16 PM


thanks its so rare for people to be loved by the same person that they have always loved not so many ppl are lucky like u i wish u guys the happiness and hopefully u guys will get married too
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2012-07-18 11:39 AM


Love is such a fickle thing and men even more so....lol. You think you find what it is you need and suddenly it is gone for no apparent reason.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
8 posted 2012-07-18 03:14 PM


haha the thing is i never believed in love
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