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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-07-11 11:28 PM



I remember.
I remember you and me.
I remember your body next to mine. &
I remember telling everyone it is fine.
I still feel the wall slammed into my face.
I still feel the weight of your body.
I still feel the urgency. &
I still feel the pain.
I know you started off good.
I know you lost control.
I know you're sorry. &
I know you're going to Hell.

© Copyright 2011 Sarah Grace - All Rights Reserved
ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
1 posted 2011-07-12 12:22 PM


wow
Haf_Alive
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since 2011-09-04
Posts 56
High in the Sky
2 posted 2011-09-04 08:44 PM


i was not expecting that last line... AT ALL.  i feel like i got punched in the face.  i feel sorry for whoever this was written about! thanks

HAF

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