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0 posted 2011-05-05 12:42 PM


I feel lost once more; these words may help me find myself,
This point in life seems to be a struggle,
As I tried to survive in society’s jungle,
Many emotions claw at my heart,
Failure, loss, and confusion deal the worst pain,
I finished what I set forth to do, and yet no joy I sense in my accomplishment,
Weakness and sadness surrounds me today,
They are left as my only two friends,
I’ve lost touch with the rest,
In a moment such as this, my heart hurts the most,
What I hold back from the rest, I spill forth on this page,
Feeling trapped inside the society’s cage,
I try often to fly away,
But then a realization washes over me,
I am no angel that can fly away,
But a worker who must chip away…


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2011 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
maddorani
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1 posted 2011-05-05 04:06 PM


loved it
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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2 posted 2011-05-09 09:04 PM


"But then a realization washes over me,
I am no angel that can fly away,
But a worker who must chip away…"

Beautiful, I love those lines very very much. Stunning way to end a poem great job!

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