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Reaching for something
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Reaching for something |
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chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Closing my eyes I wish to disappear I reach for my heart to find it's no longer here The darkness inside consumes me whole if I don't stop it will erode my soul Reaching for something reaching for light my strength is waning can't give up the fight The darkness is holding on I can't hold on for much longer Reaching in the distance to find the person the world I left behind The shadows the night is closing in The darkness is going to win Save me Help me hold on I'm slipping away the darkness I try to hide inside is taking over me Blackwidowgurl |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i love it and i can relate it to it somehow keep on writing  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is not only very well and poetically written, but its substance is very moving and very real. This is the best kind of writing. It's hard for a caring person to read something like this, though, especially if it seems to involve real feelings of a real person. But it also speaks to everyone who struggles with these same feelings. Thanks for sharing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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