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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-04-30 02:06 AM



Regret
   Repent
      Ashamed
           Embarrassed
                All these words
                 All these lines
                    are
                   over flowing
                   inside of my mind
                    each and every word
                   is being repeated,I
                   am here sitting against
                   the locked door covering
                   up my ears I still
                    can hear everything
                    whether my eyes opened
                    or closed I still can see
                      my memories as if they
                       are playing a soap opera
                          I don't want to see
                          I don't want to hear
                          I want it to stop
                          please stop
                          STOP!
                          STOP!
                          STOP!
                       someone please take me
                       away before i go instane
                        I can't take it anymore
                          I seriously can't  
                          I can't be free
                            and let go
                           I will always
                             suffer and
                             my heart will
                             be in distress
                             these feelings that
                             are within me
                              regret
                               repent
                                 ashamed
                                    embarrased
                                       torment
                                        hatred
                                        jealousy
                                          sadness
                                         depression
                                         all of it
                                        overwhelmed
                                         my heart
                                           and
                                           myself
                                       and I always
                                       suppressed
                                       my feelings
                                       leading me
                                          towards
                                           despair

                          

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-04-30 08:16 AM


Wow, this reminds me of the poems I write but never have the courage to post. I know that feeling all too well and you captured it marvelously.
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
2 posted 2011-04-30 08:24 AM


Oh and for a title what about Suppressed? I'm not much good when it comes to titles but that is the word that stuck out in my head when I read your poem.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
3 posted 2011-04-30 11:33 AM


thank you
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
4 posted 2011-04-30 01:39 PM


This is interesting...very expressive and thought provoking. I hope you find the freedom you seek. Thank you for sharing it. As for a title... I would call it Screams From Within. Good write.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
5 posted 2011-04-30 03:07 PM


thank you you should check out my heart has been gouged out
Haf_Alive
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since 2011-09-04
Posts 56
High in the Sky
6 posted 2011-09-04 09:31 PM


really becoming quite a fan of your work. it's like a razorblade with the lime still on it, stings just enough.
maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
7 posted 2011-09-04 11:29 PM


thank you you should read more of my poems tht i just posted like the hot shower or the desert and i posted some in teen poetry and thanks for being my fan i have some more in my mind but i will get to it
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