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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-04-12 07:25 PM



For whatever reason there is 
I feel somewhat betrayed.
Even after knowing you
for only a few simple days.
You sat there and called me brilliant
and told me that you knew.
But what I can't figure out
is why the hell I listened to you.
When you gave your reasons
they were very well explained.
So why does that leave me
all abandoned and hurt.
The funny thing is
I never let anyone in.
Yet here you are
crawling under my skin.
I have no right to you
and you none to me.
But what is this 
that will not let me be?
I think that it's because
you said you actually cared.
And maybe without you 
I'd have better faired.
Even though you sounded odd
I ignored the fact.
Maybe common sense was just something that you lacked.
But why was I making these excuses?
Who was I to care?
And then it hit me--
You were never really there.

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