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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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0 posted 2011-03-10 09:02 PM



It burns, but not enough to scream.

It stabs, but not enough to bleed.

It hurts, but not enough to cry.

It kills, but not enough to die.


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XGarapanX
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1 posted 2011-03-22 10:02 PM


I am beginning to realize that you, alongside a little monster who I will not name, are poetically BRILLIANT. Your poems are to be sought out by me as soon as time allows. Thanks for being here!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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2 posted 2011-03-23 09:06 PM


Thank you so much, I am completely flattered. I also want to say thank you because it is your complements on my first few poems that encouraged me to continue posting. Thank you, I value your opinions highly and am always happy to get kind words. It really means a lot, thank you.
XGarapanX
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3 posted 2011-03-24 03:36 PM


Amazing. It touches my heart to have had a positive impact upon your thoughts like that. I cannot help but be be humbled by your gracious assessment, and I cannot help but be even more mindful that the words of my heart to another can have a meaning for good or ill. I needed that reminder, since I believe myself to be accountable for every idle word that is uttered by my lips, or my pen. It is my great pleasure to have been of some small service, Poetess.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LaGraceLa
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4 posted 2011-04-29 09:55 PM


Thank you, and I'm happy to help!
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