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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-03-08 09:37 PM



It all seams to make sense,
Yet as soon as you think you have it down
It changes and sends you spinning round
Trying hopelessly to keep your feet firmly planted on the ground
As the world slams the floor into your face
And you lay there while blood from your nose and lip race,
Staining the hard, starved earth dark red
As you try to burn bridges you'd meant to mend.
It all seams to make sense,
Yet as soon as you look around 
The loud, obnoxious world dies with not even a sound
And no sight of the hope, the love, will ever be found,
For coffins deep in the hard, sun baked earth
Are only mentions to the people and their worth.
Not at their best, but at their very worst,
All the while accusing fingers point out the chosen and the cursed.
It all seams so god d*** simple.
You assume you figured it out,
But here I am, and I cry and I shout
Making it seam all so god d*** impossible
When the probability of what I say being true is improbable.
It all seams to make sense,
But then you open your eyes
And you see so clearly the fake and the lies
That you've managed to miss forever till now
And it is down on your knees in pain that you bow
Down to the gods that demand your sacrifice
When their hate for you is as cold as ice
Yet you lay down your simple life
And allow them to slit your throat with a dirty, dull knife.


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-03-22 10:09 PM


Did you happen to see the look on my face after I read this? Look up "ASTONISHED" in the dictionary. My picture is there. **cheers wildly**

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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