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littlemonster
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since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2011-02-19 11:43 AM



So seldom
do I hear your voice
settle on my outstretched palm,
stirring what little
remains within delicate lines.
I wrap warped fingers
against the pull of the tide
as your whisper fades.

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LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-02-27 01:49 PM


Interesting. I love the line, 'i wrap warped fingers', it flows very well. Good job

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