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littlemonster
Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2011-02-12 04:47 AM



I carve her wings
on my back,
drawing delicate lines
etched in guilt.

A faint trace
of all I know
still all I cannot say.

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LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-02-13 09:57 AM


Wow, that is really powerful. I loved how you kept the poem short and simple, yet it held so much meaning. Very elegant.
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-03-22 09:46 PM


Ahh, LaGraceLa! Do you not know? This Little Monster is the Queen of such impactful compact's. There is no one like her in the poetry world.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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