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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-01-30 06:44 PM



Okay, so I'm attempting to post a poem, I dont know if it is actually going to work however.

You're there, you're gone

You're weak, you're strong

You laugh, you cry

You fight, you die

You sing, you scream

You hope, you dream

You're true, you lie

You sink and you fly.


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-31 11:34 PM


I get a small sense of your real ability here, meaning nothing at all is wrong with this poem but I suspect you have some real caged talent waiting to go wild on the parchment. Wonderful piece.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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