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Dark Poetry #5

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Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

0 posted 2011-01-17 04:28 PM

Haven't written anything for a while, but here it goes.

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So many of the brightest stars become aeroplanes,
But this one I'll spend all my time gazing at-
And feeling its warm glow bury itself inside,
Pulsating and warm.
I'm star struck.

You could fall from the sky-
And I'd push you inside,
A demon I'd allow into body and mind-
In control of me, but it's not voluntary.
Our union the fault of horoscopes and
Wasted time.

But the chemistry is more than astrology.
I like to think that.

I shine as you burn me
From inside.

Singular star that pierced the clouds
And I've cloud-watched enough-
They've taken too much
Superficial love, casting
their rain upon my unknown cheeks.

Though it's not all separate.

And I fall from the sky
As you push yourself inside
My unused heart.

I burn alive.
Can't take my eyes off the danger.
I just have to wait and watch this star
And pray it's not an aeroplane.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

IhaveIssues
New Member

since 2011-01-20

Posts 2
oklahoma,USA

1 posted 2011-01-20 05:33 PM

great poem. I can Relate

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-01-23 09:51 AM

Great poem with some really notable lines. Awesome.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

3 posted 2011-01-23 11:18 AM

Thank-you.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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