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littlemonster
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since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2010-11-26 04:02 PM



It is the liar she turns you into
with every word you utter.

It is the deafening scream
that only you can hear.

It is the secrecy she demands
in return for her friendship.

It is everything she robs you of
when you thought she couldn't take any more.

It is the silent disintergration
of who you once were.

It is the theft of the memories
you fought to cling on to.

It is the encasing darkness
which leaves you without your senses.

It is the shameful knowledge
that you let her in.

It is acknowledging that despite all this
you still cling to her security.

It is believing beyond doubt
that you got what you desrved.

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2010-12-28 09:01 AM


Gawd. No freakin flattery intended... your words are insane and your brain tears me a new eye socket... You unique, rare and incredible little English beast, you.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-02-01 12:04 PM


lol! Please forgive my prior enthusiasm.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

abhursty
Junior Member
since 2009-02-25
Posts 45

3 posted 2011-04-12 09:37 AM


It's a wonderful poem. Just a bit hard to understand with lack of sleep.
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