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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-11-19 08:31 AM





I've played Welles to Hearst
again. The Oscar parties
drone insipidly.

Outside, on the darkened hills,
oh how thirsty they will be!


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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-02-27 01:58 PM


I don't really get it but it most defiantly has some hidden meaning, and it can be interpreted in a lot of different ways. Maybe write with a more clear message or emotion, because I think that helps. Good job.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-03-24 05:12 PM


It does require some sorting out, doesn't it? But it certainly is a clever write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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