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chylenedoney
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since 2010-10-14
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2010-11-18 05:24 PM



Don't wake me up
if I'm not breathing.
Don't wake me up
if my house is burning down.
Don't wake me up
if love has decieved me.
Just leave me alone for a little while.

Five more minutes is like five more years
and I just don't want to wake up.
Everything is so much better when I'm sleeping
I can ignore the alarm clock beeping in my ears.
I can do anything when I'm dreaming
All of the woes in the world just disappear.

Blackwidowgurl

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hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
1 posted 2010-11-18 11:37 PM


love this.. good start to something
Krysti

FloraScars
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since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA
2 posted 2010-12-11 06:27 PM


this is really good
cant wait to see the rest of the song

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