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Shy-Girl1
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since 2010-03-23
Posts 5
C.A.

0 posted 2010-09-24 02:55 PM


I feel as if im falling
and theres no one to catch me
I push then away, so I dont hurt
them aswell as myself
I look around and I see nothing
Im empty, Im a goast
I have one thing on my mind, it will
always be there
Im lost and I look around
everything is blank
My problems are for me and
no one else
It feels like my head will explode
I am thinking of so much and
so littler at the same time
My head is spinning I dont know
which way is right
I cant do this anymore
I feel weak, my strength is drained
Im breathless, and hurt
I have helped others so much I
forgot how to help myself
I am giveing up, I cant do it anymore
I am not strong enough to face it alone.

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pinkfrog462
Junior Member
since 2010-09-24
Posts 26
Arizona
1 posted 2010-10-06 01:38 PM


this is very deep...i feel your pain in this poem...thanks for sharing

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
2 posted 2010-10-06 02:20 PM


No one is strong alone....Nice write.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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