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Regrets |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
(Thought this best fits here, so here it goes) Regrets all now must be let go for change to enter, love to flow. Let fly away as birds in snow. Fly far away to warmer parts, or burn to ash in well kept hearths. Changed from cold and into heat, snatching victory from defeat. Regrets all now must be let go take time to tend, a new crop sow. Buried in ground, packed under toe, seasons must change, for light to show. Regrets all now must be let go, span farthest reaches by seafarer's row. Now scattered into the abyss, find beauty hidden by pain's eclipse. |
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Vorgs New Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 4 |
This is a terrific poem. I am able to relate to it on a personal level, it's a synergy of gloom and hope. That there is an incadenscence beneath the torment. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Nice work. "Seafarer's Row", eh? |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
To let go of regret, sounds so easy when you put it that way....Great write. There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy |
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