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zeusthamghty
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since 2010-06-20
Posts 45
west virginia, usa

0 posted 2010-06-22 12:46 PM



The Dream

As I lay asleep
I dream of how it’s going to end.
It is dark but I can see
Everything as bright as day.
I see the bloodshed of humans
And I thirst for what they have.
Then I feel a certain rush of rage
And I have this hunger
The hunger for something
That I haven’t had
In a very long time.
I want to hunt and kill.
I want to taste the victory.
But at this moment,
I am very week
And I need something.
But, I can’t figure it out.
I know that if I don’t get what I need
I will die
And I don’t want that.
What?
What is this?
Fangs, just growing,
I know what I want.
I want blood and nothing else
I want to take every last drop
Out of my enemies.
Then the alarm goes off
And I awaken
It is six in the morning.
I still have that hunger


do we ever loose the hunger?

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easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-06-23 08:14 AM


The short answer is yes. The long answer is no, but it transforms. And the best answer is to just thank you for a good read here.
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