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silent_slave
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0 posted 2010-05-29 07:33 PM


Desire
I sit here all alone and quiver
My heart starts to beat faster as I think of you
I can feel the burning desire submit to you
Kneel at your feet and kiss them
Lay down on the floor you walk on
And just enjoy your intoxicating presence


Lust
It's hot here
My body is on fire
I am like a river just from a thought of you
I can feel my nipples stiff any time I think of you
I close my eyes and gasp, I feel you now
I feel you and I need you more
My body is burning
My senses sharpening
As I lay here on the floor
Drooling at thought of hearing your voice
At thought of kissing your feet


Submission
Here I am, on my knees again
The floor is cold and the carpet is rough, but I dont mind
I kneel and I am happy
Naked and all yours
Yours to do with me as you wish
Longing to please you
Meek and eager
Needy and aching
Wishing for your sweet voice
Longing for your sweet touch
Craving you and needing you with all of my being


Like a lil kitten that needs its Master's touch
I lay here on the floor and think of you
Hoping for you to come by, even if just for a second
Your word brightens up my day
You controling me takes me to a high of no other kind
I day dream of you and my body aches
I feel all weak inside, but my senses are sharper
Just one word and I know I am lost
In need so strong it makes me want to screem "please stop"
And yet I want more and more of it


You say a word and I feel you all over me
And I feel so urgent need to come it's driving me crazy
My body and my brain fights a fight
Body wants to come no matter what
But my mind and my heart need to please you more
So I just lay here possessed by my own need
Surrending myself to you wholy
My need not meaning a thing to me anymore
I could need orgasm so badly it would make me screem
But I would still hold it for you, just to hear you say the "good girl"
See you pleased with me makes me purr somewhere deep inside
And theres nothing nicer than see you pleased with me
And the knowing I have done well


Devotion
So here I am
Silent, but ready to please you
Nearly invisible, but not faded yet
Hiding in the darkest corner
Corner to which only YOU know the way
You, who tamed me and tought me how to heel properly
Crawling at your feet
Longing to kiss the floor you walk on
Thankful for every single word you speak out to me
Hiding in your shadow
Enjoying your nearness as the sweetest vine

[This message has been edited by silent_slave (05-29-2010 10:49 PM).]

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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-05-30 01:57 AM


A good read, and whether empathed or suffered or both, an excellent write.

How true that fetish can make sexuality more intense and unfortunetely often more difficult to stand. Fetishes don't make human beings slaves or trash, though... far from it.

An interesting poem. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to the forums!

silent_slave
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since 2010-05-29
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2 posted 2010-05-30 03:18 AM


Thank you for the kind words and for the welcome!

As for the term "slave", I dont feel as a trash or anything like that, not at all.  

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