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Dark Poetry #5

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Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-04-18 03:37 PM

passing in seeds -

- dying alone  -
along, an endless demon -

witnessing, a careless night  - are you actually here -
once the light of naked spurs - turns to cry and die -
empty human in a vacant grave - a breath - a painful price -
-
chilling eyes - sand dust,
coldness -  raking mind
the gun , chaotic tears  - we share-
---blood starting , being lost in fight-

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[This message has been edited by Laverne Pacquire (04-20-2010 11:40 PM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-04-21 01:16 AM

Really enjoyed your perspective. Nice work.

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

2 posted 2010-04-23 05:57 PM

thanks again, mysteria. I really writing hate death poems. its encouraging to know someone reads it.

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