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Dark Poetry #5

blood entwined with roses

NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

0 posted 2010-03-25 12:04 PM

"untitled"

face distorted....
floating in the air
the scent of blood entwined with roses
my tortured senses
limitless ecstasy
In the space of a dream
Madness starting to awake
rips apart the silence
in between it always seems empty
telling ourselves we can go on living this way
though the skies are nolonger blue
theres some beauty in it still
if you just close your eyes
you can see it clearly
these illusions that fall apart so easily
sanity becomes restless staring at the same patterns
Hating them as much as you love them
thats suppose to be enough isnt it?

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2010-03-29 02:50 PM

Hmm this raises alot of thoughts while reading. Very curious piece you have here. I can't really understand what your trying to say here though. :/ But I like your wording here. Nice job.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

2 posted 2010-04-07 01:40 AM

i really like this

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

3 posted 2010-04-12 05:51 PM

thank you both

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

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