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Dark Poetry #5

tortured senses

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

0 posted 2010-02-17 05:33 PM

"untitled"

face distorted....
floating in the air
the scent of blood entwined with roses
my tortured senses
limitless ecstasy
In the space of a dream
Madness starting to awake
rips apart the silence
in between it always seems empty

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-02-19 10:52 AM

Stark...and bleak, I like it.

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

2 posted 2010-02-25 11:30 PM

short but strong. enjoyed.

VelvetVampress
Junior Member

since 2010-04-24

Posts 26

3 posted 2010-04-24 06:37 AM

great word usage....i like it

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

4 posted 2010-08-13 12:57 PM

thank you very much

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2010-10-08 12:39 PM

Great Write!

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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