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itusaman
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0 posted 2010-01-10 03:11 AM


I am in so much pain but I can't scream because the air is knocked out of me and I don't know what to do to ease the pain.


You can't hear me because you are not listening and you can't see me because you are not looking. I will die alone and when you finally find me you won't know that I was desperatley searching for you.


In my final moment you weren't there, I was scared, I was alone.
You'll never know the truth.


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1 posted 2010-01-10 09:57 PM


A very familiar story line to your post.  How many of us feel ignored, rejected, or simply unheard.  Well done.

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