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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2009-12-11 09:38 PM


I went to go take a bath because  I was sore

Next thing I knew he was out the door

I was tired and didn't want to go

But then I thought that I had to for some reason?

So I got dressed and went

I ran all the way, those 12 blocks

Got there and he wasn't there

Then got a phone call

A minute later, he was on the ground

The blood that never stopped

A gash that almost went unconscious

A walk that felt like a lifetime

The ambulance that asked questions and took us in

Waited til 4 in the morning

Then still alive went home to not hear the end

A few days later, I was the one

The one with the bruises on my body

Screams and yells always fights

I was scared to leave and I knew it wasn't alright

Two days later was when it was to come to an end

However the pain still goes on and on again

To be scared to life w/the horrors of one mistake

However in a way . .Isn't it everyone's fault?

One decision to get out of the tub >>>

Ended a friendship, a relationship, everything

Love and hate clashed together to be the worse

And yet hardly anyone knew the story

Which is why I tell all of you fellow piptalk

Readers today . . . .well even though

8 months is how long it's been since the incident

And I've never forgotten it

Kate

© Copyright 2009 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2009-12-11 09:39 PM


Yes all of the incidents described in this poem all real, this is a true story

Kate

loudsilence
New Member
since 2013-03-12
Posts 6
Atlanta, Georgia, USA
2 posted 2013-03-12 05:12 AM


Wow. Now I understand better why you have written so much...you have experienced something most people have not...you are trying to find words to describe those emotions. The search is where the beauty is. There should never be an end to the search for the perfect word(s).
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