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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2009-11-14 03:23 PM


I have not written anything in a very long time, let alone posted in this place for, what has to be many years at this point.  But I was going threw some of my older stuff and found this that I wrote a few years back and figured it was to dark for the open section, so i will post it here.  Hope you guys like it.


Tangled tightly in her web
Thoughts tossing and turning in my head
Trying to escape, this task is tough
A test my will, calling my bluff
A tempt of fate, a twisted tale
Twisted together,  I will prevail
My mind is torn, what can I do?
My attention snaps back, as the clock strikes two
A door opens up, air touching my skin
Tickles my senses, chills from within
I start to scream, overwhelmed with fear
My emotions are on a trip, my eyes start to tear
Then I wake up, it was all a dream
Subconscious reality, was not what it seems
Tenderly I wipe the sleep from my eyes
Staring out the window, at the star filled sky’s
Hoping that when I fall back asleep
That horrid thoughts, will not again creep…

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
1 posted 2009-11-14 04:51 PM


good imagery, I like the tittle too.

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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
2 posted 2009-11-17 01:06 AM


Thank you very much XxForever.BrokenxX.  I might have to dig threw some more of my old stuff and post some more.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2009-11-17 05:03 PM


I've had a few nights  like that  lately

M

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