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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

0 posted 2009-10-27 05:49 PM


By the time you realize what you've done
Ill be gone, You don't even see what your doing
to me, and I'm pretty sure you don't care.
I'm pretty sure you feel nothing when you lay beside me and listen to me cry at night.
I cry because your breaking me.
Every look of despise, every silent ignorant comment,
You tear something that I feel for you off.
Soon there will be nothing left, just scraps of
meaningless feelings, desires, and thoughts.
Scattered around, but you won't care.
You won't see them, you'll walk right over them,
not noticing whats laying beneath your feet.
Soon there will be no saving what we had.
It's almost over, to far gone.
We just sit here and watch what you are going to do.
Ignoring what you've already done.


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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
1 posted 2009-10-29 11:26 PM


You NEVER have to take anyones bull!@#$. Wonderful Write

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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