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David D Jerald
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0 posted 2009-10-27 02:05 PM



Between The Dark And The Light

One foot in the dark and one in the light --
Despair to the left and hope to the right.
Drawn to the one side and then to the other --
From the first breath -- till never another.
In the shadow of the wrong or the right --
One foot in the dark -- and one in the light.

David D Jerald


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MorningStar
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since 2009-10-26
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1 posted 2009-10-27 02:51 PM


I'm always amazed at how often I'd lean toward darkness when all I want is light...
Thank you for sharing.

loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
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2 posted 2009-10-27 08:50 PM


this a great way to desribe how i feel all of the time
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3 posted 2009-10-28 02:19 AM


I like this - it flows well and catches my attention.

Alison

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