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Self Containment |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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The acrid stench denies subtle darkness its right to hide the beast in its black folds. The sickly red glow reflecting softly from brick walls speaks loudly of hunger. A shuddering rasp escapes As weight is thrown against The iron barred door. A glint behind fierce eye Shows poor restraint As the were paces. The full moon slowly sets On its monthly cage. -*-*- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Phil, I love that opening! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
I'm new here so I'm not sure how deep and profound replies should be. But I honestly I think this is so totally cool. Vivid and cool. If I don't say it...who will? |
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