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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
Posts 48


0 posted 2009-10-22 08:14 PM



i feel, cold
i feel, sad
why do i feel this way,
there are laughing faces all around,
so why do i feel so cold,
why do i feel so bitter,
i have friends,
is it because of you?
or is there somthing wrong with me.
I dont know.
But i do care.
why do you haunt me so,
why is your face all i can think of,
Why??
Is it because my feelings were so profound?
Or is it because i still love you.
Idont n
know can you help me.


This poem explains why i wrote love nd happiness
i was in love with this guy then he dumped me for my enemy.

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-10-23 03:22 AM


Beautifully captured.
Mr Naz
Junior Member
since 2009-10-22
Posts 29
London United Kingdom
2 posted 2009-10-23 06:24 AM


know it so well
loveyourself102
Junior Member
since 2009-10-11
Posts 48

3 posted 2009-10-25 09:43 PM


thnks guys i really hate/love this guy nd i cnt get him out of my head its scary
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