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Dark Poetry #5

Judgement, Destroy Me

th1nktw1ce
Junior Member

since 2009-07-13

Posts 24

0 posted 2009-09-17 01:12 AM

There’s no forgiveness in this town when
Friends, in memoriam, pass judgments,
Whispering rippling waves into frowns,
This crushing pressure penetrates refinements,
So I’ll wait to let the beasts destroy me.
I’m built on a bed of principal and I’m beaten,
No appropriate way to defend though I’m the better man,
No leisurely hope in this town of free men,
But amongst the wolves they’re still liars
And within their forgone hopes and lives
I’m left open to confinement without disguises
So I’ll wait and let the beasts destroy me.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-09-17 06:50 PM

I've felt this way before~~ but you need to learn to ignore and look towards tomorrow being better.

M

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

2 posted 2009-09-19 09:15 AM

"There’s no forgiveness in this town when
Friends, in memoriam, pass judgments,
Whispering rippling waves into frowns,
This crushing pressure penetrates refinements,"

I love these lines. Great visuals and rhymes.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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