»
Main Forums
»
Dark Poetry #5
»
Remission
| Dark Poetry #5 |
|
Remission |
|
|
drunkenirishpoet New Member
since 2009-09-04
Posts 7Franklin, NH USA |
It’s the rhythm of the words and the reason of the rhyme lit up, split up, getting ahead of time luck, an artificial construct like freedom and religion and astrology biology, overgrown libidos in worn out tuxedos and premature fecundity will we ever find out what’s under me? will we find me? what drives me and ties me and binds me to spiritual symbolism and superstition my life’s in repetition thank GOD, indecent and obsolete my life’s in repetition thank GOD, indolent and incomplete my life’s in repetition thank GOD I’m in remission |
||
| © Copyright 2009 drunkenirishpoet - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Nice style/rhythm. |
||
|
QuietAstronomer Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18North Carolina, USA |
Conas ata tu, a cara. Found myself readng faster and faster. Great read. Deep , painful, and true. Thank you. Slan QA |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
