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drunkenirishpoet
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since 2009-09-04
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Franklin, NH USA

0 posted 2009-09-10 11:18 PM


flesh and fire conspire
to become one
truth
obscured by the sun
a light
rips away the night
frightened
exposed
dawn's breaking finds me
cold
wet
shaking

[This message has been edited by drunkenirishpoet (09-11-2009 05:24 PM).]

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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
1 posted 2009-09-11 06:40 AM


Oh my
I had a weird dream about living on an island and my best friend (Oceana) died in a war with fire...
So the title sorta caught my attention...

Very good poetic skills. Bravo.

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