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Bella Mafia
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since 2009-08-10
Posts 8


0 posted 2009-08-11 12:05 PM



Teasing Fate...
clouds dripping wonder hate
emotions vary
some may dissapate
thoughts are hendered
Perspectives? Changed
priorities slipping slowly away
disfunction and chaos take the reins
screams of laughter masking the pain
astonishing wonder roams agin
pulling desires from deep within
intrique and mischeif taylored by sin
quarls rising tension is thick
acts of injustice begining agin
Despair!
Poverty!
moods grow sick
decipt or survival
mastered techniques
twisting reallity illusions peak
asperations trailed by silence
True destiny we seek?
envoy and anger
nothing more to create
a flawless mind left to flounder...
results of Teasing Fate!


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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art
1 posted 2009-08-21 02:59 PM


very pretty flows beautifully thank you i enjoyed reading it
heartofsteel
Junior Member
since 2009-09-07
Posts 13
Oregon, USA
2 posted 2009-09-08 04:57 PM


beautiful i really enjoyed it!

May fates path fulfill your dreams.

drunkenirishpoet
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since 2009-09-04
Posts 7
Franklin, NH USA
3 posted 2009-09-10 11:15 PM


could have used spell check on this one. it kind of took away from where you were going.
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