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Loveis Standing |
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Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n New Member
since 2009-07-28
Posts 6 |
your salts will be laid upon the surface your breathe will remember the first taste of air her face will remain written on your forhead present the solids remember the scars time and technique pull us up to higher places birth and birthstones more than signify our nature our broken pieces float upon the waters edge broken pieces float upon the dim surface flat upon the heads of those who witnessed the birth dim upon the lights of the serpents of all time its time we closed our ears and let our eyes scope hearing the forests will forever bear witness to an immovable eternity watch them fall watch their spirits scream we lost peace among the woes of love the arrows reigned down and took a tide of what we once called home this is vicious relieving sanity crossing this is the love of him pouring down upon us the question is will we hear or see what is to come will we recognize i stand in love for you for my eternity |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very interesting first posting. Welcome to Passions, and if you check your email you will find a special welcome from us all here.  |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey! great first post, although i might suggest teen poetry fer some (not all) of ur poetry. you should submit ur poems from dA, they're reeeally awsome! just.another.falling.star (pip name) is from dA, her account is TantalizedBaker and/or SilentOSunshine (dA name). you aught to check her out, you'd get along me thinks;P also Falling rain in teen poetry is really good, have fun! !Tracey! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
(haha, tracey thinks we'd get along, that must be a good thing then). anyways, yeah. i read this and its wonderful. the flow of the words and the description of your topic is nicely put together. great job on your first post! email me if you want to talk. library. julianna |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Welcome. And well done, I loved the fact that you dint rhyme i believe it lends just as much emotion as rhyming. Thank you for sharing. Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul. |
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Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n New Member
since 2009-07-28
Posts 6 |
Thanks to everyone for their comments |
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