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th1nktw1ce
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since 2009-07-13
Posts 24


0 posted 2009-07-25 05:23 AM



Wasting time while insomnia smiles
On blankets warming lies in soft designs,
These wanting eyes shut in a fettered sublime,
As violins sing and dreams devise
Tracing time to thoughts moving rapidly
My cerebrum moves into tranquil relativity
This treasure, given to drunken parody,
Is pleasure given to wishful insanity

© Copyright 2009 Adam - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
1 posted 2009-08-06 05:38 PM


I am wowed. It needs no title, for it in its self is simply amazing.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

Swisha
Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32

2 posted 2009-08-07 02:50 PM


I love it.. Alot of thinking for such few words, those are the best.. Nicely done
Def-init
Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
3 posted 2009-08-09 04:13 PM


This was interesting.
I wish you made it a tad longer though
Good nonetheless. I dont think I have read to many pieces by you. Something I will be changing.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

Bella Mafia
New Member
since 2009-08-10
Posts 8

4 posted 2009-08-11 12:08 PM


I admire your style of writing not many people understand i loved it
th1nktw1ce
Junior Member
since 2009-07-13
Posts 24

5 posted 2009-09-17 01:46 AM


my old name on this site was thinktwice...no 1's. there is a decent archive of stuff you'll like and stuff you'll dislike. my e-mail adress which it's registered under is no longer in existence, so I couldn't re access my piptalk identity.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2009-09-17 06:54 PM


"Wasting time while insomnia smiles "


loved every line of it~~

M

athousandstars
New Member
since 2009-10-02
Posts 3

7 posted 2009-10-03 12:05 PM


wow, great job. I love it =D
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