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Dark Poetry #5

People's Words

ShadowOfLies
Junior Member

since 2009-06-21

Posts 13

0 posted 2009-06-21 08:58 AM

People speak

and I listen

but what they say

I do not hear

don’t give up

over and over

how can I not

when you run all over

my heart is numb

my trust misplaced

why did I think

it will go my way

why would I think

that you could’ve stayed...

Brian

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-06-21 05:24 PM

A very heartfelt first post, and welcome to the forums of Passions in Poetry. Please check your email for a special welcome from us all here. Hope to read more of your work soon.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-06-21 07:44 PM

very heartfelt and honest

good work and welcome

Yoin

ShadowOfLies
Junior Member

since 2009-06-21

Posts 13

3 posted 2009-06-22 04:50 PM

Thank you for the welcome. Glad to hear my writing is appreciated.
Thanks again and blessed be.

Brian

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