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Yoinn
Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-06-14 04:45 PM



Heads In Boxes

Climactic body rocking visions,
lowered heads and ideals,
an orator of weakness, of suffering,
nightly for you.

Beliefs broken by heads in boxes.
They tell you, teach you,
frame your existence,
define your worthiness,
all in an one hour segment.


How we worship
network gods, the
orators of lies
and generated dreams.
Bow down and
worship the wand that brings them.
Triple A powered and programmable.

We must cut the cable,
free the dreams,
THINK AND DECIDE
for ourselves.

We must wake up.

Yoin

© Copyright 2009 Tim W. - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2009-08-30 12:58 PM



"Climactic body rocking visions"


I enjoyed the whole poem, but this very beginning struck me and kept me reading for more.

Enjoyed

Jenn

"Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me"

Jewel

heartofsteel
Junior Member
since 2009-09-07
Posts 13
Oregon, USA
2 posted 2009-09-07 11:01 PM


wow great job
i adored this
keep writing!

May fates path fulfill your dreams.

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