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Nature, Love, Alone
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Nature, Love, Alone |
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lol@megan New Member
since 2009-06-11
Posts 7 |
(its a little rough, and i am new to this website, first draft kinda thing, no title) Now with you gone, i can feel the warm summer breeze in my hair. This sun on my shoulders lets me know that you are gone, but the gray clouds in the sky say its not for long. Thunderstorms coming in, now this has got to be what is fair. If i could feel the clouds, they would feel like my skin touching yours. But what i miss the most is the shadows of you around this house. All your things are gone now, but your smell still lingers on my pillow case. When I close my eyes I can see you sleeping on this very pillowcase, and i woke up that morning to see the sun shining in your hair. Now this house is empty all your things are gone, and im all alone. But now i can feel the arm summer breeze in my hair, and the sun on my shoulders. Only thing is im starting to wonder, if this going to matter. |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
tht was really good megan! midnightdreamer She past you, but doesn't notice you. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Loved the concluding line an how it smacks you in the eye. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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