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Make me laugh New Member
since 2009-06-06
Posts 3 |
Hey guys, this is my first post here, My name is John and I am 20..nice to be here I hope you all enjoy this...please comment if you want...sorry about punctuation and capitalization... it is just my style.. again i apologize for the length take it all away, cuz it was fake and when your sinkin down in what you call yourself i hope its nothin you ignore, feelin the weight upon your chest, listenin for anything you can hold, holding your tongue to say good bye, but you know dont have to try, i know everything ends, but when you smile at me, please dont pretend, live again so i can feel myself smile, no ones here were all alone, all we are is what we begin, never take that away no no, and i know you do not know, and there is a baby inside kickin marriage it demands, i know you know it please dont pretend, the best was always daft to you, pretty blue eyes, to my surprise your running from what we made, you were so proud and now you hate, everything we are, but its not about me, its about everything you think, and the way with every move you make how you realize you get closer to knowing the truth,and everything ends, but when you smile at me please dont pretend, i'm not going nowhere if you don't push, don't push if you cant run, and i hope you know i'd trade in for wire, i could stay here with you forever, and you would cry because you were scared, but dont worry baby, i will get you there, look at our little mistake growin inside you, i hope you know, that i felt your soul... and love is word not a feeling, so whats it matter if it dies... and i'm so tired i can't think, im listening to our little mistake, kickin' inside... whats the difference if i cry? whats it matter if i cant explode? Whats it matter if all we do is lie, loves a word not a feelin , not a verse, and i cant hold you down with love, because its a word not a feelin, whats it matter if it hurts? leave me here with out little mistake..theres no baby kickin inside, whats it matter if i cry? |
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lol@megan New Member
since 2009-06-11
Posts 7 |
Wow, this is incredibly deep. i love this, i love your rhymes, and how you made it a story. You made me want to keep on reading, which is very good. The end is the best part, with the questions, Propss. |
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