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prize
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since 2008-11-21
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0 posted 2009-05-20 08:40 AM


♪♫♪♫♪
This is the day,
The pitiful day,

That the Lord has made,
When my life was changed—

I will feel grief,
Desire relief,

And bring shame to it,
Feeling sad in it—

This is the day
When I’m pierced with pain,

I will remorse
And may act on it—

This is the day
I think of the grave,
Can the Lord—save—me?
♪♫♪♫♪



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Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
1 posted 2009-05-20 08:16 PM


Yo, I can so picture this with so many different melodies. I liked reading this a lot.
Simple and right to the point.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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