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Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-04-04 11:48 AM



A death from "Crib-violence",
my fate is up.
Face it, face the real.
I Wield 'Pen&Paper' like an artist
with a paintbrush and easel
I make people feel grateful.
Reading my poems,
they crave the need to!
I have the drive to...
be exciting...
I capture them,
make them think
using metaphors,
like shooting
an old baby for talking...
Unaware in this polar air,
for the prepared,
Vivid imagery exists.
Just picture an arctic hare.
Picture footprints in the snow
gracing a house-of-prayer.

I poured my heart out,
blood all over this keyboard
with my psychotic beliefs.
A flood of emotion
soaking a piece of "loose-leaf",
With crushing imagery,
like a bully with beef being
nothing more then a coward cattle thief.
An Arab in disbelief
watching the American
commander in Chief.
The sharks in the ocean
viewing a sub coasting the
barrier reef.
Like the 'herbal' flowers that bud.
Parents dread kids
stomping around in the mud.
"SCUD" missiles still fire
after the countdown reads none!
Still have BBQs,
with the hamburger buns.
Weather black or white,
in the light or dark,
players still hit home-runs,
right out of the park!
One by one,
mother's sons and
Father's daughters grow-up.
Can they really do it,
can they fill life's measuring cup?
Horses still gallop,
bombs in Europe blowup.
In fact, I reading the newspaper article
about rubble still to clean-up!
Abuse in the church,
still caused by Bishops.
Suicide Still used...
when life needs to speed-up!
Mug shots taken
in the police line-ups.

I picture twilight with depth
because of moonlight.
Wrong color,
but I still see her hair
with a chest so hypnotic
it stood out as fantastic
at this social affair.
Life starts, life ends.
Cost a lot to see it,
God's movie was great!
Laying flat on that bedspring,
the credits start rolling.
Let them sail away
with best wishes and blessings.
Because it is never easy to witness,
a person's passing...


- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

[This message has been edited by Def-init (04-04-2009 12:40 PM).]

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