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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2009-02-23 02:40 PM


I hate the words you speak to me
I hate the way you make me scream
I hate how you can get your way
With every little word you say
I hate the smile on your face
I hate the way you make me stay
I hate your mouth all over me
I hate that you won't let me be
I hate it when you come inside
Seducing me with all your lies
I hate how you don't understand
Just how much I hate those hands
I hate the broken bedroom door
That I walked in with nothing more
Than all the innocence I had
I hate myself for going back
I hate that you won't ever know
The hatred that I'll never show
I hate the world for what it's done
I hate this monster you've become

Emily Shives


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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
1 posted 2009-02-24 01:16 PM


A great poem Emily.

But your hidden monster, cruel sedition and angry regret can't help but plant the seed of fear in my mind.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
2 posted 2009-03-18 12:34 PM


wow i really really love this poem!!

Brittany

Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
3 posted 2009-03-21 09:32 AM


This is a simple and straight forward poem.
The feeling of despair, regret and a sense of loss of innocence can be felt throughout this entire piece. It was a nice read, Slowly.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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