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The Eclipse
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The Eclipse |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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The minds of men form a thousand desires Though their hearts hold dear but one The stars of the night light a thousand pyres Though there can be but one sun In the dark and the cold we rest our heads And wonder what will become All of heavens lights cannot warm our hearts When the eclipse of true love comes On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Geez, Luke! I couldn't write something even if I spent years concentrating! Your amazing. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thanks Zach. There hasn't been a lot of love for the dark forums lately, this includes myself writing more romantic works in open and not wallowing in self pity. Lately I've been trying to capture the darkness within without letting it consume me and ending up writing endlessly on the same grim subject. Not sure if I'm winning, but if you check out One Heaven Sent, Sleeping Seraph and Beauty for the End of Days in open, then you will see I'm making steps to shedding my burnt and torn armour and embracing the new and good in my life. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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