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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958


0 posted 2009-01-25 12:05 PM



You promised community and friendship
             love and acceptance
             imagination and freedom
What you gave was spurning and criticism
                  tolerance and rejection
                  guilt and legalism

When I met God you told me
The devil had ensnared me

         joy in nothingness is
         intolerable to you
         yet God - is was that he
         is - created ex nihilo

       imagination and creation is
   evil to you because the Bible tells you so
        
              You killed God and used
              the atheists as your alibi

So now I am lonely with
only God to talk to

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SlowlyFallAway
Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
1 posted 2009-02-12 01:16 AM


I guess He's one you can always count on.
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