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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-01-19 02:56 PM


My soul casts a shadow
The unquiet spirits of times gone and love lost
Sing mournfully under winter skies
The shades will never lay to rest
Their ghostly lament chills my heart

Icy black a river runs cold and deep
Carrying the driftwood of my thoughts
Beneath a canopy of weeping willows
An empty ferry a broken lantern
Lie forgotten off a crumbling jetty

Rime coats the leaves and branches
Like skeletal hands pointing the way home
The chill wind pulls me to the river
And I battle against it
Silently striding into my own shadow
In the light of the setting sun

On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides

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Inspired-8
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Pluto
1 posted 2009-01-19 05:06 PM


Brilliant dark write.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
2 posted 2009-01-19 11:10 PM


Wow, this reminds me of a book i once read.
You are a very good writer.
Library.

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Emmalee Janelle
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